Monday, 16 November 2009

life

life..
bunch of ups and downs it is
there are times when you are standing on the highest mountain
looking and laughing at the walking birds

forever is not
and there will be times when you're just standing on a small piece of stone
being looked at and laughed at
nothing stays still

is this the reality?
or is it just your game of mind standing on top of the mountain?
you will never realize what the real truth is
cause life is actually a bunch of lies

the sun rises and shines into your room
giving the most splendid view there is
but no one really nows the real true meaning of the shines

fake, fake, fake..
what you really see is the world fakes its look upon you
beautiful the world is
or too beautiful to be true..

never you are on top of the highest mountain
persuming is what you are really doing
the opposite of the real world
a harsh place full of lies

13 comments:

  1. couldn't agree more. Nice words ran.. ditunggu tulisan2 lainnya hhe. : )

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  2. really like the wording and its arrangement ran!

    but im more positive now that u r completely a gloomy person or a pessimist if I shud say..

    would be great to read some enthusiasm or passion in ur next writings ran..
    looking forward for it!

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  5. artinya ran? bhahahaha
    azeeekk deh anak aiesec
    susah deh mainannyaaa
    haha *rasis


    kita damai ya ran

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  6. really like your writing, ren
    ga nyangka aja dibalik tampang lo yang sangar, tersimpan pemikiran seperti ini, hahaa

    you've grown up, pal
    terus berkarya

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  7. bagus raaan!! puisinya membangkitkan banget hehe :)

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  8. mantap gan!
    keep blogging..

    anyway, iya gw demen dengerin laruku..dari kelas smp..selain laruku si gw suka gazette, x japan, beat crusaders, round table, macem2 deh..haha..

    ayok2 aja deh main bareng..emang lo main apa ran?gitar?atau bass?ajarin gw dong! haha..

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  9. nyastra abis..
    komen di nirwanirwan.blogspot ya!

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