life..
bunch of ups and downs it is
there are times when you are standing on the highest mountain
looking and laughing at the walking birds
forever is not
and there will be times when you're just standing on a small piece of stone
being looked at and laughed at
nothing stays still
is this the reality?
or is it just your game of mind standing on top of the mountain?
you will never realize what the real truth is
cause life is actually a bunch of lies
the sun rises and shines into your room
giving the most splendid view there is
but no one really nows the real true meaning of the shines
fake, fake, fake..
what you really see is the world fakes its look upon you
beautiful the world is
or too beautiful to be true..
never you are on top of the highest mountain
persuming is what you are really doing
the opposite of the real world
a harsh place full of lies
couldn't agree more. Nice words ran.. ditunggu tulisan2 lainnya hhe. : )
ReplyDeletereally like the wording and its arrangement ran!
ReplyDeletebut im more positive now that u r completely a gloomy person or a pessimist if I shud say..
would be great to read some enthusiasm or passion in ur next writings ran..
looking forward for it!
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ReplyDeleteciyee randyy
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ReplyDeleteartinya ran? bhahahaha
ReplyDeleteazeeekk deh anak aiesec
susah deh mainannyaaa
haha *rasis
kita damai ya ran
really like your writing, ren
ReplyDeletega nyangka aja dibalik tampang lo yang sangar, tersimpan pemikiran seperti ini, hahaa
you've grown up, pal
terus berkarya
bagus raaan!! puisinya membangkitkan banget hehe :)
ReplyDeletemantap gan!
ReplyDeletekeep blogging..
anyway, iya gw demen dengerin laruku..dari kelas smp..selain laruku si gw suka gazette, x japan, beat crusaders, round table, macem2 deh..haha..
ayok2 aja deh main bareng..emang lo main apa ran?gitar?atau bass?ajarin gw dong! haha..
nyastra abis..
ReplyDeletekomen di nirwanirwan.blogspot ya!
ok bgt, ronald
ReplyDeletebagus nih puisinya ran !
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